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Being a superstar sometimes wasn't
all it was cracked up to be. And somedays, being a
superstar is the last thing Marshall Mathers wants to
be, because of his superstardom status, it has landed
him in Waikiki, and to make matters worse, it's a "Meet
n Greet'. But what did come with superstardom, where
women throwing themselves at your feet and Marshall was
no exception to that perk. So why is he so bothered when
he meets a girl who doesn't throw herself at his feet?
Savannah Rae is the sassy, smart mouthed, young heroine
who seemingly is not interested in snagging Eminem for
herself, rather humiliating him. Well, not so much
humiliating, as playing practical jokes. I'm stopping
here, but believe me when I say that this story will
have you in hysterics. The quick wit comebacks and tight
humour. I can't even begin to describe how funny this
is. All I can say is I was literally holding my sides
laughing. It is fantastic!
First of all I want to say that I
love, love, love the way Marshall is portrayed here.
He's witty, he's got a bit of an attitude, he's smart,
he's funny and he cracks me up. He is slmost exactly how
I imagine he would be in real life. Jenn does a
wonderful job with her portrayal of Marshall. Seriously
guys, I can't say that enough. From the first scene I
just loved the humour!
“Marshall.”
“A’ight, dawg! Don’t cream your jeans over it. Shit.”
That
earned him a look, and Marshall smirked. “What’d he do?
Promise to get you laid if I show up on time? You got
some hot little honey waitin’ on you in Waikiki?”
Paul
stopped walking and turned to look at him. “What? No..”
“Uh
huh. Is that why you’re standing there lookin’ guilty as
all hell?” He laughed.
The
door slammed in his face, and Marshall couldn’t remember
the last time he’d gotten such a rise out of his
manager. Maybe the day ain’t gonna be a total waste
after all, he thought. At least I got Paul to
fuck with once we get to Waikiki. I should tell his
woman he got the herpes or somethin’.
He left the hotel suite with a grin on his face. The
worst part of a meet and greet was the boredom, and
Paul had just dropped the cure right in his lap.
I
can also say that you will LOVE Savannah Rae - she is
just in a word, Awesome! Hilarious! Sassy! Ok so sue me
that was three words - want me to keep going or have you
got the picture ;) And what is best about Savannah is
that she's such a real character. She's the kinda girl I
would love to have in my circle of "gal pals". Jenn
flawlessly pulls off creating a real character whom the
readers will not only love, but I think would love to be
in her position. Savannah is the epitome of sass!
And
you guys will love the rap Marshall does about Savannah
Rae. Jenn you had me in hysterics! It was just
fantastic. So so creative. Not only do you guys get to
read a great story - but also Jenn stuns you with her
rap-writing skills. What more persuasion do you need to
get clicking?
The
only thing disappointing about "Survival of the Fittest"
is its length! Jenn! Come on! Update girl! (You have so
much talent don't waste it!) And the fact that it was
last updated at the end of 2003. Guys, you MUST read
this story and bug Jenn to update it. I am certain that
you're going to love it as much as me! :)
Well
done Jenn, I can't wait to read more :) Kate, May
2004 222 contest
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