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The Eva Series

By Dru
Complete
NC-17 for highly explicit sex
email author: crazyevildru@yahoo.com

Author's Note: Told by Eva, an unconventional girl. Note, while Eminem is crucial to her story, he is not the main character here, although there is a lot of sex (yum) and interaction. This story IS told from Eva's POV only and please be warned- she's a very... um... sexual being. So the smut here is much more intense due to adult themes (such as bondage and light sub/dom relations, as well a *small* threesome with Eva and two random guys). Please- I *love* this fic- but be warned. It'll be a journey you'll never forget!

Criminal
The 1st story in the Eva series

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Part 5

Prisoner
The 2nd story in the Eva series

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Part 5

Part 6

Part 7

Part 8

Part 9

Smiles
an Eva interlude

Mine
an Eva interlude

Friend
an Eva interlude

Reviews:
"Instead of one story I'm taking on the entire franchise. One word and I don't use this lightly - Phenomenal. Part of what I absolutely loved about this entire series is that it wasn't just smut. There was intense, explicit erotica involved but it wasn't done lightly. Now, I have NOTHING against smut, love the stuff actually, but sometimes it's easy to get sucked into a story written by an author who simply gets off on how many times they can use the words "cock" or "fuck". Dru isn't one of them. She has developed an incredible cast of characters with more on their minds than just bumpin' uglies. Her characters are deep, feeling people who have issues that many people can relate to. I found myself going cross-eyed more than once because I had been staring at the screen for so long that I had forgotten to blink. This is a massive compliment considering that if the story sucks I have no problem with ditching it before reading beyond the third paragraph. I'm very picky. I edit stories online for other sites all the time and I have no patience with people who have no grammar skills or don't know what a spell check is. Dru made me forget that these people weren't real and I was able to empathize with the troubles they encountered. Her use of a second language was killer and I was thrilled with the way she portrayed more than one or two sides to Marshall's character. The sex scenes were delicious and well thought out. I recommend this story to anyone old enough to handle it and suggest they read all of the installments at least twice. Dru has the mark of an authentic writer and that is largely due to her use of a commonly misplaced factor in many fanfics - SUBTEXT. I was and continue to be impressed by her writing and look forward to whatever comes next... or should I say "cums"?" ~ Savannah Rae, July 2003

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Ok, so I'm proud to say this was my first eminem fanfic ever! What an induction i must say. I don't know what exactly drew me to it, but once I started reading, I was definately hooked. So hooked in fact that i read it all in one sitting! (I think you definately know a good story when you just HAVE to know what happens and you ride the emotional waves with every chapter...hehe)

I would say that the stand out feature of this story is the character development. I think Eva is such a unique little being, and Dru is absolutley inspirational the way that she has created this woman who is so strong, yet so fragile - intelligent, but naive. Someone who has never been inhibited by their strong desires, even if it hurts them. I think its about time that we start seeing female characters who are these sensual, sexual beings, without being simply 'the slutty girl who trys to steal the good girls boyfriend' stereotype that we see all too often in fanfics of all genres. Lets face it, a woman needs to realise and embrace her sexuality and not be afraid of it.

Dru portrays Eva's experimenting with her desire for intimacy, colliding with the expectations which come from a very strict catholic upbringing. How many girls struggle with this same conflict everyday? So definate props to dru for breaking the mould a little here and dealing with some very important subject matter.

Continuing with Dru's great characterisations - her treatment of the standard "Marshall/Eminem" character is to be applauded greatly also. It is always the hardest thing in fanfic to stay away from cliches' and stereotypes of what we assume these celebrity's personalities to be. Too often we see these key characters written a certain way, with certain characteristics, and the authors never really make the famous characters their own as much as their original characters they created alongside them. However, this isn't the case and Dru has shaped Marshall into a complex and at times a joyful character to read about. She carefully constructs several sides to his personality - which i believe is the key to lifting this story off the page and becoming emotionally involved/attached to these 'people' and their story.

All in all, here's what makes this story stand out:

- Understated and subtle development of character - which in the end is the most effective

- A gusty and at time raw display of a huge amount of different emotions which literally grab you and shake you up.

-Originality, staying away from those damn cliches'.

-Writing to relate. I believe anyone who reads this story will be nodding their head in agreement as their heart goes out to at least one, maybe several, maybe all of the issues discussed in this great story. No gloss, just raw shit - and its really great.

Major major respect to Dru and I hope she definately keeps up the good work!

Go read it if you haven't! You won't be disappointed. ~ Cassidy, December 2003

These stories are for entertainment purposes only. They are completely fictitious, and the authors mean no harm to EMINEM, his family, friends, or anyone else that may have been depicted as a 'real life' character. No money was made on the fiction here, either directly or indirectly, i.e. paid advertising. In other words - it's just a bunch of shit we wrote for fun. Please don't take it seriously.